Rough Cut

This is a rough cut of our opening sequence, we have a lot more to edit in it to make it look better, flow better and create the impact we want on the audiences. One of the things we are planning to do is to shorten the opening shots of Lilly running through the woods. This is because we feel as it is, at the moment it does not have a very fast pace and by doing this to the show we can get the pace we intended. We also need to insert some dijetic sound over this scene to make it seem more sinister, because at the moment you can hear birds singing which is giving the scene an impress that is a nice happy scene. My group and i have came to the conclusion that the dijetic sound the is scene should be a heart beating which gets faster and a recording of Elly breathing heavily.

During this first scene we are also planning to cut the shots up into smaller shots, and randomly move the order of them. This is because we feel it will look more professional because it will constantly be switching to different view/perspectives of Lilly running; and also increase the pace of the scene. We have not entirely stuck to our story board in this scene because we have included some more shots such as a long shot and a high angle shot.

For the bedroom scene we also need to add music to it when Lilly switches on the radio. We have decided to use the music we made from the program Garage Band, that atchally play toward the end of the scene. We need to extend the music and place it so it comes on exactly when Lilly presses the radio button. Viering from our story board again we have not done the point of view shot of Lilly waking up and rubbing here eyes in this scene. This because we were finding it difficult to make it look realistic.

In our final scene of Lilly at her lockers we also need to shorten these scenes. This is because as it is the scenes do to flow as well as they could, however if we shorten them we feel it will solve this problem.